Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Russet Wait

Words lost in moments
A hope they find their way
To the rusting stop
By the sunset strip
Where dreams still await

As  a part of Poets of the Page - Mini Challenge - Day 1


payal agarwal said...

With the "sunset strip" you paint a lovely image here..:)

Eden "Kymele" Mabee said...

A nice contrast between hope for the future and a sense of waiting... almost too long.

Anna K. Stewart said...

Very hopeful. I like the first line...I get the impression these words or letters are all the unspoken things left too long apology or 'i love you'...and despite the passage of time....the rest....there's still hope. Very nice.